I.... really like the black and white much better than this colored one. OTL
I don't understand the colors.... And the title in white makes this look slapdash... ;A;
Although, the colors make it so that the characters stand out more, and you can take note of the details better... but... I don't know. It seems... not as strong? It just made such an impression on me as a black and white piece....
I had a hard time picking em since I added so much detail. ORZ Any low saturated color felt like it would make things drab and I did wanted to add some order with the bright colors and the gradation.
@U@ I could always just make it monotone version if the colors are too distracting.
BTW, check out the black and white version I posted. Does the title look better there?
I went and read the whole comic after I wrote that comment. It's an interesting story. The colors do help separate the parts of the image better than just the black and white. And after having read the comic, it does make more sense why you used the colors. It also does help that the background portion is actually more desaturated than the rest of the image in the colored version to give the illusion of depth. The title, I already commented on the other piece, is still highly unsophisticated not like the rest of the picture. It looks very out of place.
Don't get me wrong, I love the drawing >A<;; I just hope I'm being helpful OTL;;
I don't understand the colors.... And the title in white makes this look slapdash... ;A;
Although, the colors make it so that the characters stand out more, and you can take note of the details better... but... I don't know. It seems... not as strong? It just made such an impression on me as a black and white piece....
@U@ I could always just make it monotone version if the colors are too distracting.
BTW, check out the black and white version I posted. Does the title look better there?
Don't get me wrong, I love the drawing >A<;; I just hope I'm being helpful OTL;;